Boeing

sparkling and moving 
                                        constellation in night's sky
                                           thunder kills silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Anytime, BL... I'll be here at the soup for the next 4 days... thank you for the reply
A   Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 11:34 AM
BL, I like the night and thunder. It does not silence the moment. I love this haiku. I like the light show and sound... LINDA
Devnath  Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:00 PM
Thanks a lot my *friend for reading my poem and putting comment on it. At night when thunder continues means there's no silence. Really that's. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 8:40 AM
- The third line is strong: "thunder kills silence" !!! - Great haiku, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Thanks a lot again for your lovely comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 4:55 PM
oh yes, they sure do thunder, don't they? I have seen and head them!!
Devnath  Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
Meade Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 1:58 PM
a night storm -- power and light, lovely my dear friend. 7
Devnath  Avatar
January 8, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Mr. Devnath, a 7 , true meaning in a few words
Devnath  Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Many thanks my lovely friend for reading my poem and for your nice comment. Loved always,bl
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