Body Shop

i walked in
through the
open double

doors 

and heard 
a disembodied
voice ask what can

i do

you for
as car
hoods

were

left open
as mouths
at a dentists

and

other cars
were on lifts
being examined

letting out

bodily fluids as if
a proctologist
snapping off

her gloves

speaks saying
let it all run out
then after we will

refill

but i at the bay
door was standing
naked but seemed un

seen

so i yelled
i'm in need 
of a complete

overhaul

start
with
the

heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Adams Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 10:55 AM
so sad.... but nicely penned!
Connelly Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 12:25 PM
I'm just now seeing your comment. Thanks for commenting Sandra
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