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i walked in through the open double doors and heard a disembodied voice ask what can i do you for as car hoods were left open as mouths at a dentists and other cars were on lifts being examined letting out bodily fluids as if a proctologist snapping off her gloves speaks saying let it all run out then after we will refill but i at the bay door was standing naked but seemed un seen so i yelled i'm in need of a complete overhaul start with the heart

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Date: 2/19/2020 10:55:00 AM
so sad.... but nicely penned!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 2/1/2023 12:25:00 PM
I'm just now seeing your comment. Thanks for commenting Sandra

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