Body Image

Sometimes studying the mirror I'm overcome with chagrin
Feeling disappointed by this shell I'm dwelling in.
With my slightly too thick midriff there above my underwear,
I'm more the rotund apple than alluring luscious pear,
Making ludicrous comparisons to girls with waspy waists,
And my nose, Lord, Pinocchio's, upon my pleasant face
With its odd small accompanying hump placed what!...To accentuate?

Later, however, on better days, my focus redirects
To reviewing my favorite qualities, and what I see reflects
A somewhat shapely figure; Legs lean, well-formed and strong;
Lovely eyes, lips and breasts, and lashes that are long.
So I'm obliged to acknowledge with accepting certainty
My temple, though flawed, was gifted by God
(And there's always rhinoplasty)!

For the "I Am" Poetry Contest of Frank H.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Babcock Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:25 PM
i think we all see imperfections in ourselves but in God's eyes we are just as we should be. love phyl
Clark Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 10:46 PM
My goodness, Andrea ... who cares what a person looks like when they can write like this!!? Great write! Jack C
Nehls Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Hi Andrea. We may not be perfect. Our bodies may not be perfect. But, God is the perfect architect. We honor him by who we are not by what we look like. You, my wonderful friend, have written a humorous and honest poem that will cause many of us to nod our head and say, "ain't it the truth. Thanks so much. Robert
Lindley Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 6:08 PM
A great write my friend. Only one human has ever been perfect, we that fail the test all have our qualities and gifts. Bravo!!!!!!!!
Johnson Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Hi Andrea, love your Body Image writing. So many will relate to the message and the inspiration in the words. Keep up the splendid work!
Ponce Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 4:05 AM
This poem made me get rid of my insecurities and appreciate myself more. Thank you for writing this, Andrea!
Duggan Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 7:10 PM
Hi Andrea, that is a great poem, mind you it gets worse as you get older and you don't really care as you get more lumps and bumps all over, enjoyed the read......Vera..............
Torres Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Andrea.. I really love this one!! ..I'm glad to meet you.. more personally!! lol...your body image... that's a blessing!! ..you have pointed noise, I have flat!.. big bumper.. oh no!.. I have flat!~.. awesome win and write..!! CONGRATULATIONS!! ^_^
Macfarlane Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Andrea, you are a hoot, enjoyed this amusing write. Congrats on a terrific win! Hugs
Jones Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:33 AM
Love love....:-) :-) :-) :-)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Congrats on all your wins Andrea. Lazy of me to say that but this darn computer is moving so slowly I am about to give up for the night. It makes my eyes hurt. I thought this one might do well.
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 10:26 AM
A beautiful poem with a message and a pinch of humour to go with it. You worried how you look? Don't you hear the wolf whistles as you walk down soup's corridors?:) congrats on your win. // paul
May Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Glad to see this one on the list....congrats on your win
Sergi Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 8:34 AM
Hi Andrea: A beautiful description of Monroe who writes like Poe. Congratulations on your win. An awesome poem!
Poet Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 8:02 AM
Very nice Andrea!Enjoyed :)
A. Sharma Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 10:38 PM
Congrats on great win Andrea ! loved the bold write!
Mehta Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 10:37 PM
Wonderful write and congrats on the win in the contest I Am, andrea
A   Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Andrea, .. Congratulations, in Frank's contest.. XOX~ Linda
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Nice to see that what you see is not obsessive behavior. For when we look into the mirror, God's grace is our one savior.
Horne Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 8:06 AM
LOL, had a chuckle here. You look just fine to me! As you say, though, good or bad, we're all what we are. Don't bother visiting my page, my friend, as I've just posted a poem for your contest this time. Hope you have a great weekend xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 2:37 AM
You have so much more in that brilliant brain that you don't need to give a care to the body Andrea. None of us stay 21 forever, though Joan Rivers is giving it a good go. LOL. hugs, C
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Oh my gosh Connie, you made me laugh. And we all know how well Joan looks. :)
Gasun Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 1:39 AM
I love and adore your beautiful poem describing your awesomeness my dearest friend Andrea. I admire Pinochio's nose and you gave me smiles from each line of your descriptions. The ending is great. Thank u so much for sharing! Good luck again in the contest. Have a great wkend to u and your loved ones! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Bordner Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:45 PM
Take charge of your esteem, and always try diligently to respect that " One of a kind " vessel that you stomp and romp in. So glad you mentioned those feathery eye lashes, one of my favorite parts of a woman, including well grown eye brows. J.A.B.
Sirak Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Your poetry is perfection and so is your 'temple'. I was anorexic for years and now when I am tempted to find flaws to fix I just remind myself that God made me exactly how He wanted and He doesn't make mistakes.
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:56 PM
thanks, Monterey. I never went so far as to become anorexic but I have tried numerous fad diets. None have lasting effects. so today I just practice moderation. It's all I can do and still enjoy my life.
Carroll Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:36 PM
An incisive write Andrea!
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