Body Bag

ravens watch with keen interest
as the swat of flies tiers
poke the belly...poke the eyes first
bickering over servings ensues

the wolves already on his scent
his walk flat as a tyre
vultures circle over the exact spot
of dead meat on a fryer

miles of forest for companion
demons whisper in his ears
post-mortem frozen desolation
shadow dissected disappears 

follow his footsteps into hell
a wrong turn into the moor
being lost in the woods is no thrill
a body bag would be much warmer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Thabang, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
Ngoma Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Hi Linda...thank you lots & God bless...rgds, Tbang
A  Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Thabang :) Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest. Love **SKAT**
Ngoma Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Hi Skatie...this is more your genre, thought u might like it...thanks for the placing...cheers, Tbang
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 7:59 PM
incredible imagery in this chilling sad write:-) hugs jan xxx
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