Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars

*A real situation I am experiencing now after a major coronary surgery I underwent towards the end of last month.

Written 5 November, 2023
For Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars Poetry Contest 
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                                     Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars*

                                Just back home from a surgery
                                      Of coronary arteries,
                                 With the body ailing with pain,
                         Chess and left foot stretching with strain,

                              When getting to and up from bed
                                  Is an awful burden to dread,
                             When taking meals instills no taste,
                              When sight of pills emits distaste,

                              When fulfilling one`s daily needs 
                                 Becomes a real load, indeed,
                             When suffering becomes a friend,
                            When ailing bones foresee no end,

                            When treading few steps is a core,
                                Yet the spirit soars very high
                                Like eagles flying in the sky,
                               It is time the Lord to adore,

                            It`s time to recall divine hymns,
                         It is time the Lord`s name to chime,
                            It is high time the soul to seek,
                              It is time the spirit to meet,

                          It`s time to raise the spirit high, 
                              Let it fly high up in the sky,
                       Let positive thoughts greet the mind
                         That the body its health may find.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 11/5/2023 6:08:00 AM
Your poem adeptly captures the essence of major coronary surgery, showcasing your remarkable imagination and evocative imagery. Furthermore, the meticulous selection of words and metaphors adds a layer of profound beauty to your work. Wishing you a swift recovery and continued good health.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 11/5/2023 10:35:00 AM
Thanks a lot Master Sotto for your very positive comments and good wishes. Wish you well. Regards.
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