Bobsledding Dodoitsu

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Our Daily Bread – Croydon Seventh-day Adventist Church

Bobsledding Dodoitsu B O B S L E Decorate the house and tree Danish cookies grab bag gift I N G Dizzy sliding in the snow O Daily Bread of Life O I T S U *7775 syllables 2020 December 02

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2020 1:10:00 PM

these are such fun to do, right? Very well done and good use of different form with dodoitsu. Thanks for my win in your contest recently!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/3/2020 1:14:00 PM

Ingenious of Kim, and thanks, Andrea, for your participation, Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2020 5:56:00 AM

Creative use of the form. Thanks for dropping by my page to let me know that I placed in your contest. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/3/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, for your extended courtesies, Grace be with you, Aloha!