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Bobby, You Are In Trouble

I spent the whole night dressed up like a witch collecting lots of candy and then YOU stole all of it! You’re lucky I’m no snitch, I won’t tell Mom, but here is what I’ll do: I know your secrets and the games you play with different girls that you like at our school (especially Patricia) and the way you two-time her. You know that isn’t cool! You like her best. Well, Bobby here’s the deal. You give back all my candy that you took or I’ll be spilling all the beans – for REAL. Remember I have seen your small black book! And I’ll be wanting interest for I’d like not just my candy, but your old blue bike! Oct. 22. 2019 for Bobby May's If I Were Your Brother Poetry Contest

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:24:00 AM

You're not asking too much pay-back are you (lol) Love this Andrea. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/31/2019 9:53:00 AM

You sound like this brother. This deserved a win!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/30/2019 3:15:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this one. It kind of reminds me of mines. Lol! Great minds think alike. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis

Hello There

Date: 10/30/2019 2:17:00 PM

Back for a congrats on this fun piece ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2019 9:45:00 AM

- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest Andrea - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement I am sorry I stole your candy do you forgive me, I just couldn't resit it you can have the wrappers back

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 10/29/2019 6:01:00 PM

Awesome write Andrea, revenge can be sweet! Candies for a bike, a clever trade. Hugs

Jennifer Walker

Date: 10/26/2019 3:20:00 PM

Would you have ever done this sis, I think you were way too kind. I could see you thinking this but never doing it. Loved the flow could see this as a song.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/27/2019 11:00:00 AM

of course I would not have done that, Jenny, but it was fun thinking it up!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/26/2019 8:35:00 AM

oh bribery is so cruel when it comes to the affairs of the heart...bet he thinks twice before stealing the candy again... fun read Andrea :) hugs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/24/2019 9:43:00 PM

Oh, my - it didn't occur to me that we're to actually pretend Bobby is our brother - did everyone do that or just clever you? Talk about serious tone, you laid it on him and again I got a poem visual - your wagging finger. Great job, I got a bit scared you might be holding a wooden spoon! Love, CayCay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/27/2019 11:02:00 AM

Thanks, Caycay, The wooden spoon is interesting for you to bring up. That's what Joe's mom did to him. my poor hubbie having to live with that all his childhood. Last time Bobby did a contest like this, I used his name that time too. After all, he told us "Imagine I were your brother!!"