Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Bobby, You Are In Trouble

I spent the whole night dressed up like a witch
collecting lots of candy and then YOU
stole all of it! You’re lucky I’m no snitch,
I won’t tell Mom, but here is what I’ll do:

I know your secrets and the games you play
with different girls that you like at our school
(especially Patricia) and the way
you two-time her. You know that isn’t cool!

You like her best. Well, Bobby here’s the deal.
You give back all my candy that you took
or I’ll be spilling all the beans – for REAL.
Remember I have seen your small black book!

And I’ll be wanting interest for I’d like
not just my candy, but your old blue bike!


Oct. 22. 2019 for Bobby May's If I Were Your Brother Poetry Contest

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Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 6:24 AM You're not asking too much pay-back are you (lol) Love this Andrea. Congratulations on your placement. Charlie

Caren Krutsinger October 31, 2019 at 9:53 AM You sound like this brother. This deserved a win!

Alexis Y. October 30, 2019 at 3:15 PM Hi Andrea, I really enjoyed this one. It kind of reminds me of mines. Lol! Great minds think alike. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis

Hello There October 30, 2019 at 2:17 PM Back for a congrats on this fun piece ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 9:45 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest Andrea - I enjoy reading your story :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May October 30, 2019 at 9:02 AM Congratulations on your placement I am sorry I stole your candy do you forgive me, I just couldn't resit it you can have the wrappers back

Cecilia Macfarlane October 29, 2019 at 6:01 PM Awesome write Andrea, revenge can be sweet! Candies for a bike, a clever trade. Hugs

Jennifer Walker October 26, 2019 at 3:20 PM Would you have ever done this sis, I think you were way too kind. I could see you thinking this but never doing it. Loved the flow could see this as a song. Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2019 at 11:00 AM of course I would not have done that, Jenny, but it was fun thinking it up!

Sandra Adams October 26, 2019 at 8:35 AM oh bribery is so cruel when it comes to the affairs of the heart...bet he thinks twice before stealing the candy again... fun read Andrea :) hugs

CayCay Godwin October 24, 2019 at 9:43 PM Oh, my - it didn't occur to me that we're to actually pretend Bobby is our brother - did everyone do that or just clever you? Talk about serious tone, you laid it on him and again I got a poem visual - your wagging finger. Great job, I got a bit scared you might be holding a wooden spoon! Love, CayCay Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2019 at 11:02 AM Thanks, Caycay, The wooden spoon is interesting for you to bring up. That's what Joe's mom did to him. my poor hubbie having to live with that all his childhood. Last time Bobby did a contest like this, I used his name that time too. After all, he told us "Imagine I were your brother!!"

Lindsay Laurie October 24, 2019 at 7:44 PM G'day Andrea … on your way to a great career and will do well for yourself if all goes to plan - enjoyed your verse Andrea - Lindsay

Mike Bayles October 24, 2019 at 12:21 PM I like the rhyme and voice in your poem, Andrea.

Quoth Theraven October 24, 2019 at 10:33 AM Andrea, I like this sordid tale of extortion and blackmail. And I like the name Patricia and the write that spoke it. -Richard

Hello There October 24, 2019 at 12:33 AM So funny, Andrea ~ you devious child, you ;)

Richard Lamoureux October 23, 2019 at 1:16 PM A bit of blackmail is very effective. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for your visit.

Silent One October 23, 2019 at 12:03 PM brilliant... love your humour.. Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2019 at 11:53 AM thanks so much for that.

Matthew Anish October 23, 2019 at 8:28 AM Fun poem! Good luck in the contest Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Horne October 23, 2019 at 8:03 AM Ha ha, cute one here, my friend

Regina Mcintosh October 23, 2019 at 8:01 AM Cute. Blessings always, Gina

Chris Green October 23, 2019 at 7:27 AM That was cute Andrea. Nice little poetic story of stolen candy and blackmail. : ) Best wishes in the contest

Vijay Pandit October 23, 2019 at 7:04 AM Oh, the sweet childhood memories! Lovely write, Andrea.

Elaine Perrin October 23, 2019 at 3:24 AM Fab poem Andrea lol :-) x

Harry Horsman October 23, 2019 at 12:38 AM Oh sounds like two of a kind...or is revenge sweet. great poetry, love it....

Jan Allison October 22, 2019 at 11:58 PM ha ha ha he is in BIG trouble now I especially love the ending Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Johnson October 22, 2019 at 9:09 PM :) Oh My, his old blue bike too huh? :) lol

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