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Bobbing Down the Hill

bob bobsled bobblehead bobbing bouncing bawl AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on March 10, 2019

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/12/2019 12:48:00 AM

You said, "bobblehead"; I see, "bobblehead"...bobbling...bobble...bobble...okay, I want the, "shapely shimmy" back.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 8:30:00 AM

LOL thanks, ML.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 3/10/2019 11:43:00 PM

Aawww, sounds like a rough landing!! (Love this one!) ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2019 12:08:00 AM

LOL thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Rhona.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/10/2019 10:07:00 PM

You could have substituted "ball" for "bawl" and it would have made sense too, going in a different direction.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 10:30:00 PM

I'm glad you caught that... it was supposed to be a play on words, Caren. BAWL sounds a lot like the obvious BALL. LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2019 1:37:00 PM

- Great one, Line - If it's for contest ... I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine. The contest inspired me to write a couple of poems in the lanterne form.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2019 1:30:00 PM

I need to check out Joseph's rules again . I enjoy the different kinds of bobbles you came up with here!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 4:19:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.