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Bobbing Down the Hill

bob
bobsled
bobblehead
bobbing bouncing
bawl



AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2021

funwinterword playlanterne

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M. L. Kiser

March 12, 2019 at 12:48 AM

You said, "bobblehead"; I see, "bobblehead"...bobbling...bobble...bobble...okay, I want the, "shapely shimmy" back.

Line Gauthier

March 12, 2019 at 8:30 AM

LOL thanks, ML.

Rhona Mcferran

March 10, 2019 at 11:43 PM

Aawww, sounds like a rough landing!! (Love this one!) ;)

Line Gauthier

March 11, 2019 at 12:08 AM

LOL thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Rhona.

Caren Krutsinger

March 10, 2019 at 10:07 PM

You could have substituted "ball" for "bawl" and it would have made sense too, going in a different direction.

Line Gauthier

March 10, 2019 at 10:30 PM

I'm glad you caught that... it was supposed to be a play on words, Caren. BAWL sounds a lot like the obvious BALL. LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 10, 2019 at 1:37 PM

- Great one, Line - If it's for contest ... I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

March 10, 2019 at 4:18 PM

Thanks, Sunshine. The contest inspired me to write a couple of poems in the lanterne form.

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2019 at 1:30 PM

I need to check out Joseph's rules again . I enjoy the different kinds of bobbles you came up with here!

Line Gauthier

March 10, 2019 at 4:19 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Bobbing Down the Hill

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