Get Your Premium Membership

Boat

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Jeff Martin.


Serving on a submarine

Surreptitious and remote Expeditious and cutthroat Crazy, Tough, Desperate, Vicious Such was life on a boat That swam with the fishes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/23/2018 10:42:00 PM
Even though I enjoy the sea, the waves, and the melody. I can understand how being on a Submarine would be, through these images you paint. Sounds adventurous indeed. ~ Brandy
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs