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Serving on a submarine

Boat

Surreptitious and remote Expeditious and cutthroat Crazy, Tough, Desperate, Vicious Such was life on a boat That swam with the fishes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 23, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Even though I enjoy the sea, the waves, and the melody. I can understand how being on a Submarine would be, through these images you paint. Sounds adventurous indeed. ~ Brandy
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