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Blushed Verses On Amber Sky

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Where blushed verses of horizon compose on the amber sky Jubilation resonates from marigold echoes of the sunlit arc Quivering ripples of water-designs, glittering rays of golden spark Beneath darkened canopy of clouded intentions floating by Oblivious to rosy brush-strokes mesmerizing romantic sight And the song of freedom erupting from wings of a lonely flight Where blushed verses of horizon compose on the amber sky October 8, 2019 Placed 1st: Make it seven poetry contest, image #2 Rhyme: ABBaCCA Sponsor: Joseph May Placed 3rd: Strand 650 by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/13/2020 4:15:00 PM

The amber sky is a beautiful scene :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:06:00 PM

You did this really well, VIjay. The judge really went for the poems describing this beautiful picture. Congrats for your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2019 3:56:00 PM

Much appreciate Andrea...many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2019 9:12:00 AM

I am under the spell of your colourful imagery, Vijay! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:57:00 PM

Much appreciate Paul..many thanks. Regards!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2019 5:27:00 AM

such beautiful imagery and I love the title Vijay, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:56:00 PM

Much appreciate Jan--many thanks.

Hello There

Date: 10/21/2019 12:24:00 AM

Congratulations, Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:56:00 PM

Much appreciate HT..many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2019 6:40:00 PM

I love the "marigold echoes of the sunlit arc", Congrats on your win Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:55:00 PM

Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/20/2019 6:35:00 PM

i knew this would do well...back to say congratulations my friend... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/22/2019 3:55:00 PM

Much appreciate the return visit..many thanks my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2019 11:36:00 AM

Gorgeous lines. The title is especially eye-catching!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/15/2019 10:03:00 AM

Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 10/11/2019 5:40:00 PM

Very beautifully described Amber Sky!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2019 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Smita--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 10/11/2019 7:08:00 AM

How beautifully you describe this glorious picture Vijay, you truly bring it alive my friend. 'Quivering ripples of water designs' I love those words Vijay, for they evoke such exquisite imagery. Surely a top place win for you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2019 6:43:00 AM

Much appreciate the kindest thoughts--many thanks, Ann.

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/10/2019 9:44:00 AM

Lovely imagery...Well done too...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/12/2019 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Arturo.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/9/2019 1:25:00 PM

Wow Vijay, I wish I could write awesome romantic, glowing blushed horizon poems like you do, I compare you to a famous pianist - you play with words, instead of piano keys and enthrall our eyes, whilst a pianist enthrall our ears. Wonderful poetry dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/10/2019 9:28:00 AM

Much appreciate the kind remarks, Jennifer--you are always so very kind--many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 10/8/2019 11:35:00 PM

"...darkened canopy of clouded intentions..." Great line. Nicely crafted , my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2019 6:40:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Lawrence..many thanks. Hope to read more of your poetry soon.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/8/2019 10:25:00 PM

"Quivering ripples, on the amber sky" There is something beautiful about placing these thoughts together. I am imagining being there, in that moment. Dipping and diving in peaceful poetic waves. Once again, your words wrap softly around me. This shall linger in my Favorites. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2019 6:38:00 AM

Reading your comments brings smiles to the start of my new day. Always a pleasure to read your feedback, my friend. Much appreciate..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Hello There

Date: 10/8/2019 7:30:00 PM

You've painted this scene beautifully with your words, Vijay ~ good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2019 6:35:00 AM

Glad you liked it, HT..much appreciate..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Judy Ball

Date: 10/8/2019 7:14:00 PM

Lovely Vijay Beautiful description. Love the pic. it gives added dimension. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2019 6:34:00 AM

The photo was given for the contest theme..much appreciate your kind remarks Judy--many thanks.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/8/2019 12:54:00 PM

Hello Vilay Pandit, I love the way tou discribe the amber sky. Have a nice day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2019 6:32:00 AM

Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/8/2019 10:59:00 AM

wow... this is exquisite my friend, love the amber sky, although i am particular to the name amber, so this one really grabbed me in...i think this one will be a top win for sure...love it... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/9/2019 6:32:00 AM

I remember reading your poem about Amber..thank you my friend for your vote of confidence..much appreciate..many thanks.