Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

Blushed Verses On Amber Sky

Where blushed verses of horizon compose on the amber sky

Jubilation resonates from marigold echoes of the sunlit arc

Quivering ripples of water-designs, glittering rays of golden spark

Beneath darkened canopy of clouded intentions floating by

Oblivious to rosy brush-strokes mesmerizing romantic sight

And the song of freedom erupting from wings of a lonely flight

Where blushed verses of horizon compose on the amber sky

October 8, 2019
Placed 1st: Make it seven poetry contest, image #2
Rhyme: ABBaCCA
Sponsor: Joseph May
Placed 3rd: Strand 650 by Brian Strand

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Angela Crabtree November 13, 2020 at 4:15 PM The amber sky is a beautiful scene :)

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2019 at 5:06 PM You did this really well, VIjay. The judge really went for the poems describing this beautiful picture. Congrats for your win. Vijay Pandit October 29, 2019 at 3:56 PM Much appreciate Andrea...many thanks.

Paul Callus October 21, 2019 at 9:12 AM I am under the spell of your colourful imagery, Vijay! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:57 PM Much appreciate Paul..many thanks. Regards!

Jan Allison October 21, 2019 at 5:27 AM such beautiful imagery and I love the title Vijay, :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:56 PM Much appreciate Jan--many thanks.

Hello There October 21, 2019 at 12:24 AM Congratulations, Vijay! :) Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:56 PM Much appreciate HT..many thanks.

Joseph May October 20, 2019 at 6:40 PM I love the "marigold echoes of the sunlit arc", Congrats on your win Vijay.. Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:55 PM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Sandra Adams October 20, 2019 at 6:35 PM i knew this would do well...back to say congratulations my friend... hugs :) Vijay Pandit October 22, 2019 at 3:55 PM Much appreciate the return visit..many thanks my friend.

Andrea Dietrich October 14, 2019 at 11:36 AM Gorgeous lines. The title is especially eye-catching! Vijay Pandit October 15, 2019 at 10:03 AM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Smita Kulkarni October 11, 2019 at 5:40 PM Very beautifully described Amber Sky! Vijay Pandit October 12, 2019 at 6:44 AM Thank you Smita--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour October 11, 2019 at 7:08 AM How beautifully you describe this glorious picture Vijay, you truly bring it alive my friend. 'Quivering ripples of water designs' I love those words Vijay, for they evoke such exquisite imagery. Surely a top place win for you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Vijay Pandit October 12, 2019 at 6:43 AM Much appreciate the kindest thoughts--many thanks, Ann.

Arturo Michael October 10, 2019 at 9:44 AM Lovely imagery...Well done too... Vijay Pandit October 12, 2019 at 6:42 AM Thank you Arturo.

Jennifer Proxenos October 9, 2019 at 1:25 PM Wow Vijay, I wish I could write awesome romantic, glowing blushed horizon poems like you do, I compare you to a famous pianist - you play with words, instead of piano keys and enthrall our eyes, whilst a pianist enthrall our ears. Wonderful poetry dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit October 10, 2019 at 9:28 AM Much appreciate the kind remarks, Jennifer--you are always so very kind--many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp October 8, 2019 at 11:35 PM "...darkened canopy of clouded intentions..." Great line. Nicely crafted , my friend. Vijay Pandit October 9, 2019 at 6:40 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Lawrence..many thanks. Hope to read more of your poetry soon.

Brandy Nicole October 8, 2019 at 10:25 PM "Quivering ripples, on the amber sky" There is something beautiful about placing these thoughts together. I am imagining being there, in that moment. Dipping and diving in peaceful poetic waves. Once again, your words wrap softly around me. This shall linger in my Favorites. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit October 9, 2019 at 6:38 AM Reading your comments brings smiles to the start of my new day. Always a pleasure to read your feedback, my friend. Much appreciate..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Hello There October 8, 2019 at 7:30 PM You've painted this scene beautifully with your words, Vijay ~ good luck in the contest! Vijay Pandit October 9, 2019 at 6:35 AM Glad you liked it, HT..much appreciate..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Judy Ball October 8, 2019 at 7:14 PM Lovely Vijay Beautiful description. Love the pic. it gives added dimension. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit October 9, 2019 at 6:34 AM The photo was given for the contest theme..much appreciate your kind remarks Judy--many thanks.

Darlene De Beaulieu October 8, 2019 at 12:54 PM Hello Vilay Pandit, I love the way tou discribe the amber sky. Have a nice day my friend. Vijay Pandit October 9, 2019 at 6:32 AM Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Sandra Adams October 8, 2019 at 10:59 AM wow... this is exquisite my friend, love the amber sky, although i am particular to the name amber, so this one really grabbed me in...i think this one will be a top win for sure...love it... hugs :) Vijay Pandit October 9, 2019 at 6:32 AM I remember reading your poem about Amber..thank you my friend for your vote of confidence..much appreciate..many thanks.