Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Blush of Dawn

From Heaven's height comes lucent light  
Spectacular skies of a sanguine sunrise 
Where peace prevails as men set sails    
Upon swirling seas amidst a balmy breeze  
As Dawn displays her dappled haze 
With a florid flush of rouge toned blush


May 24th, 2022
Bite Size Poem no. 44 Contest
Hosted by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier November 10, 2022 at 3:20 PM Lovely brevity, Jenna ~

Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2022 at 10:03 AM Congratulations on your win. Your sunset picture and write are lovely. Have a great/blessed day....................... Jenna Logan May 27, 2022 at 10:07 AM Thanks a lot, Paula.

Christuraj Alex May 26, 2022 at 9:36 PM "sanguine sunrise" - Wow! Beautiful poem. Congratulations! Jenna Logan May 27, 2022 at 10:06 AM Thanks so much, Chris.

L Milton Hankins May 24, 2022 at 9:59 AM Ah, this is absolutely superb writing, Jenna. I loved the rhymes in each line. And, as you probably know, I love the seas, so this is my kind of poem. Good stuff! Jenna Logan May 24, 2022 at 10:35 AM Your comments made me smile, Milt. Thanks for noticing the double rhyme.

Mark Koplin May 24, 2022 at 7:44 AM Beautifully done! Jenna Logan May 24, 2022 at 8:30 AM Thank you very much, Mark.

Tom Cunningham May 24, 2022 at 6:54 AM My favourite time of day, I love the dawn and the amazing colours it brings, then the spark and the golden orb appears, the beginning of a brand new day. Tom Jenna Logan May 24, 2022 at 7:01 AM Your description is lovely imagery. Thank you, Tom.

Jeff Kyser May 24, 2022 at 4:47 AM Very nice! Nothing but gray out the window this morning, but we got much needed rain here. Jenna Logan May 24, 2022 at 4:53 AM Thanks, Jeff. Rained most of the night here, but a gentle drizzle at the moment.