Blurry Mirror

Steam clouds on mirror
Hide the reflection in blurred
Chose to be unknown

Hidden soul not speak
It says through the words of eyes
I'm living in you

Unnamed solely side
Lived from the remained shadow
Under self conscious

Friend or predator
Both are potentially hurts
Pick the wise answer

Make peace with yourself 
Take two sides in good or bad
Those, the shapes of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Good morning Yanny
Posey Avatar
March 21, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Beautiful treatment of Haiku. Cryptic, and yet so meaningful.... Hugs to ya..... Jake
Widjanarko Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Thank you John wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 4:31 PM
When you get to my age the best Mirror is a Blurry mirror. Good morning Yanny.
Widjanarko Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Thank you Rick, :D wishing you a great day there :D- hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 11:11 PM
Good morning Yanny. I like this one alot.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Rick, glad that you like it :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Ougo Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 6:34 AM
Deep..very deep :-)
Widjanarko Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 6:38 AM
Thank you Word Craft for your kindly visit to my page :) it's a pleasure :D - hug, yanny
Gigno Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 8:20 PM
!!!
Widjanarko Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 9:48 PM
:D !!!?
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Deep and very well written my friend - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Widjanarko Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:11 AM
Thank you Anne :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny
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