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Blurry Mirror

Steam clouds on mirror Hide the reflection in blurred Chose to be unknown Hidden soul not speak It says through the words of eyes I'm living in you Unnamed solely side Lived from the remained shadow Under self conscious Friend or predator Both are potentially hurts Pick the wise answer Make peace with yourself  Take two sides in good or bad Those, the shapes of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
Good morning Yanny
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Date: 3/21/2013 9:30:00 AM
Beautiful treatment of Haiku. Cryptic, and yet so meaningful.... Hugs to ya..... Jake
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/16/2013 6:32:00 PM
Thank you John wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/6/2013 4:31:00 PM
When you get to my age the best Mirror is a Blurry mirror. Good morning Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/7/2013 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Rick, :D wishing you a great day there :D- hug, yanny
Date: 2/13/2013 11:11:00 PM
Good morning Yanny. I like this one alot.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/15/2013 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Rick, glad that you like it :D wishing you a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/13/2013 6:34:00 AM
Deep..very deep :-)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/13/2013 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Word Craft for your kindly visit to my page :) it's a pleasure :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/12/2013 8:20:00 PM
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/12/2013 9:48:00 PM
:D !!!?
Date: 2/12/2013 6:26:00 AM
Deep and very well written my friend - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/12/2013 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Anne :D wishing you a great day :D - hug, yanny