Blurred Truths

Chasing chaos in ego's flight
 Finding only stress and strife
 With no peace of mind in sight
 Cluttered thoughts, confusion is rife

 Seeking answers that can't be found
 Asking wrong questions all the time
 Truth is blurring all around
 Lost is its meaning sublime

 Grasping at wonders from the sky
 Disconnected from chapter and verse
 Flawed notions have wings to fly
 And things seem to be getting worse
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 11-7-18
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Raven Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Hi Joseph, chaos painted with such creativity. Your words sing true my friend. Deep thoughts within poetic lines. Can any of us see the truth? Searching, but not finding. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend....Mike.
Man Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:00 AM
I’m relating to chaos right now and you paint it here with imaginative brilliance!
Daniel Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Lovely poem, Joseph:)
Onclaud Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 5:35 PM
enjoyed the introspective stream of your thought, joseph... nicely out together... huggs
Y. Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Hi Joseph, You have penned such a thought provoking write. With that being said, I agree with the content of this well written write:-) Alexis
Vaso Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Very contemplative, loved the poem.
Pandit Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Deep in thoughts... wonderfully expressed..well written poem, Joseph.
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 3:24 PM
yes, things do seem to be getting worse. Great profound poetry to go with that eye catching title.
Sands Avatar
November 7, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Well expressed Joseph. I just put in a poem Whirlwind and talked about reaching for the sky as well. Similar! :)
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November 7, 2018 at 1:49 PM
- Is it possible to find the truth ... and what is the truth ? - "The more you dig, the more water runs from the sources" ... is a saying, Joseph - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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