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Blurred Truths

Chasing chaos in ego's flight Finding only stress and strife With no peace of mind in sight Cluttered thoughts, confusion is rife Seeking answers that can't be found Asking wrong questions all the time Truth is blurring all around Lost is its meaning sublime Grasping at wonders from the sky Disconnected from chapter and verse Flawed notions have wings to fly And things seem to be getting worse --- 11-7-18

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/10/2018 3:05:00 PM

Hi Joseph, chaos painted with such creativity. Your words sing true my friend. Deep thoughts within poetic lines. Can any of us see the truth? Searching, but not finding. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend....Mike.

Lyric Man

Date: 11/10/2018 8:00:00 AM

I’m relating to chaos right now and you paint it here with imaginative brilliance!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2018 8:15:00 AM

Lovely poem, Joseph:)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/8/2018 7:21:00 PM

Down to the truth of it! A profound, thought provoking verse. But plainly spoken, Joseph.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2018 5:35:00 PM

enjoyed the introspective stream of your thought, joseph... nicely out together... huggs

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/8/2018 11:17:00 AM

Hi Joseph, You have penned such a thought provoking write. With that being said, I agree with the content of this well written write:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/7/2018 9:16:00 PM

Very contemplative, loved the poem.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2018 5:04:00 PM

Deep in thoughts... wonderfully expressed..well written poem, Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2018 3:24:00 PM

yes, things do seem to be getting worse. Great profound poetry to go with that eye catching title.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/7/2018 3:21:00 PM

Well expressed Joseph. I just put in a poem Whirlwind and talked about reaching for the sky as well. Similar! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2018 1:49:00 PM

- Is it possible to find the truth ... and what is the truth ? - "The more you dig, the more water runs from the sources" ... is a saying, Joseph - A great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)