Blurr (8 Years Old, Quickly Revised)

Poetry is my passion,
But love is ever-lasting
It never dies,
Just remains on the inside trapped in.
I travel back to taste your lips pressed against mine,
Stuck for the moment, then a prisoner to present time.
All that I wished was to remain how we were,
Now I write these rhymes with my eyes in a blurr.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 28, 2009 at 12:52 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Invisable. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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