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He keeps trying his barrage of raging vitriol, but it's a blunt knife on his target's alligator skin A predictable high school bully with the same ol' lines of attack. His target always sees them coming... and the invectives inflict no pain! The bully sharpens the blade with each try, then slashes and stabs in rapid succession... but the knife never breaks his victim's skin, and the funny thing about it is... the bully seems to be the one bleeding! One fine day, the boy bravely stands up for himself with this unvarnished truth... "You repeatedly try to cut me open, yet you lacerate yourself each time you fail to break me; and you'll keep failing, so choose your next victim!" Bravo, kiddo, bravo! Submitted for... Strand Select 12,Any Form ,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/15/2020 Date written: 01/12/2020

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Date: 1/12/2020 11:54:00 AM
Unvarnished truth indeed! Much depth in your poem, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/12/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

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