Notes About The Poem

Blunt Knife

He keeps trying his barrage 
of raging vitriol, but it's a blunt knife
on his target's alligator skin

A predictable high school bully
with the same ol' lines of attack.
His target always sees them coming...

and the invectives inflict no pain!

The bully sharpens the blade
with each try, then slashes and stabs
in rapid succession...

but the knife never breaks his victim's skin, 
and the funny thing about it is... 
the bully seems to be the one bleeding!

One fine day, the boy
bravely stands up for himself 
with this unvarnished truth...

"You repeatedly try to cut me open, 
yet you lacerate yourself each time
you fail to break me; and you'll keep 
failing, so choose your next victim!"

Bravo, kiddo, bravo!


Submitted for...
Strand Select 12,Any Form ,Any Theme Poetry Contest (Winner: Honorable Mention)
Sponsored by Brian Strand 
Date: 01/15/2020

Date written: 01/12/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Pandit Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Unvarnished truth indeed! Much depth in your poem, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace