Blunder

It all begins with a notion That transforms into erosion Then follows with some confusion I don't want your temptation You were never my creation Accomplice of my suffocation Throughout my nightmares i have dreamt I won't have a final attempt Evading your divulged contempt Searching for a simple target I am unwilling to forget Attracting me like a magnet It's not easy to stop pretending Hard to protect what your defending To be forever condescending I am not the one to complain Furious eyes full of disdain You're impossible to sustain You were never close to being right Second chances slowly dim the light You are nothing but an oversight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Breidenthal Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:07 PM
Excellent rhyming scheme and what emotion you display on this one. I'm really liking your poetry. (: Always, Laura
Culverhouse Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 7:27 PM
not pretending....I do like this poem....welcome to poetry soup!! enjoyed reading Your work!!
Price Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 4:09 PM
I decided I love the way you write. Wonderful.
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 4:20 PM
Good rhyming work..Sara
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