Bluesy

bluesy lament
to the moon
of broken hearts



AP: 2nd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 12:34 AM
"a blusey lament" - love this line so much! It makes the entire haiku calm and mysterious.
Gauthier Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
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