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Blues

Somberly and perpetually it plays Dark melodies in my days Rumblings of guitar and piano play at distant corners of my mind Lingering concerts of sorrows so unkind Redbone said, "The blues ain't nothing but a good man feeling bad." I want to be a good man, maybe this is why I'm feeling sad Deep, deeply in my soul Cacophonic blasts so piercing and bold Echoes of a distant and short past Melancholic riffs, runs, and good licks long last Blues, Blues I did not choose Instead, I was chosen So, monotonous strums And deep pulsating drums Play, They play in my mind and heart....... When will it end? Better yet, when did it start?

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Date: 2/2/2024 6:32:00 PM
Hello Stewart, "Blues" strikes a chord deep within the soul. Your words reflect the melancholy of life's struggles, echoing through the somber melodies of sorrow. The blues, a haunting companion, seem to linger in every note, every beat. Keep channeling your emotions into your poetry—it's a powerful expression of the human experience. - Daniel
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Stewart Watkins
Date: 2/3/2024 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for your commentary, Daniel. The blues of our lives are undeniable.

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