Blues

Blues suffused with rhythm Born from pangs of regret Bound with longing and need Bass guitar slowly strummed B.B. King's sad lament Bittersweet love gone wrong Broken heart; mournful soul October 15, 2020 Pleiades 2 Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2020 12:45:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/21/2020 10:04:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jan.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/20/2020 12:30:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your first place win, Jenna. Am sure the thrill isn't gone with your wonderful win!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/21/2020 10:03:00 AM

LOL at your humor, Sam. Love it, and thank you.

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2020 11:28:00 AM

I love the blues guitar, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win Jenna

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/21/2020 10:03:00 AM

Thank YOU, Joseph, for honoring my poem with a placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2020 10:58:00 AM

- Congratulations on your blues Pleiades, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/21/2020 10:02:00 AM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise.

John Watt

Date: 10/20/2020 10:05:00 AM

Yours was the first one I've read that honored the Blues, and you nailed it Jenna. BB King was the perfect name to drop for this art form that has also spawned so many other forms of music. You got down to the soul of it "Broken heart; mournful soul". Congrats on your #1, I'm happy for you.

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/21/2020 10:02:00 AM

I sincerely appreciate your kind remarks and congrats, John. Thank you!