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Blues

Blues suffused with rhythm
Born from pangs of regret
Bound with longing and need
Bass guitar slowly strummed
B.B. King's sad lament
Bittersweet love gone wrong
Broken heart;  mournful soul


October 15, 2020
Pleiades 2 Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

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Jan Allison Date: 10/20/2020 12:45:00 PM Dropping back with many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/21/2020 10:04:00 AM Thank you very much, Jan.

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/20/2020 12:30:00 PM Back with congratulations on your first place win, Jenna. Am sure the thrill isn't gone with your wonderful win! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/21/2020 10:03:00 AM LOL at your humor, Sam. Love it, and thank you.

Joseph May Date: 10/20/2020 11:28:00 AM I love the blues guitar, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win Jenna Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/21/2020 10:03:00 AM Thank YOU, Joseph, for honoring my poem with a placement.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/20/2020 10:58:00 AM - Congratulations on your blues Pleiades, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/21/2020 10:02:00 AM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise.

John Watt Date: 10/20/2020 10:05:00 AM Yours was the first one I've read that honored the Blues, and you nailed it Jenna. BB King was the perfect name to drop for this art form that has also spawned so many other forms of music. You got down to the soul of it "Broken heart; mournful soul". Congrats on your #1, I'm happy for you. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/21/2020 10:02:00 AM I sincerely appreciate your kind remarks and congrats, John. Thank you!

John Gondolf Date: 10/17/2020 5:09:00 AM Lucille spoke softly to us through B.B.'s amazing talent. Nicely done, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. Hugs. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/17/2020 5:27:00 AM Thanks so much, John. Yep, that's another great one. Pickin' and cryin'.Low down funky blues.

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/16/2020 2:09:00 PM Jenna, you captured the spirit and the soul of the blues. I, too, love B.B. King. All the best for the contest. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/17/2020 5:20:00 AM Thanks for sharing your kind thoughts, Sam. My favorite is 'The Thrill is Gone.'

Robert Lindley Date: 10/16/2020 9:05:00 AM Great blues depiction my friend. I am a huge fan of KIng.. Afav. God bless Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/16/2020 10:23:00 AM Thank you, Robert. Me, too!

Jan Allison Date: 10/15/2020 4:38:00 PM perfect depiction of the blues jenna:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 10/15/2020 4:47:00 PM Thank you, Jan...for the earlier one, also. Hugs.