Bluebirds

lavender blossoms 
surround a pair of bluebirds
wispy clouds float by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ward Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 8:09 AM
That's interesting imagery, Joseph. Julia, :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 2:19 PM
hey, I see you did two tanka. tell me which tanka is NOT in my contest and I will read that one!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 2:00 AM
What a lovely image you have created in your wonderful haiku, Joseph. It's so easy to picture this scene when reading your words. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
Haight Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 3:24 PM
I like this, Joseph. Nice image...motionless bluebirds framed by blossoms...clouds the only thing moving behind...surreal..Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Pretty as a picture!
Lawless Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 5:15 PM
This little gem made me stop and enjoy the visual that filled my mind on reading. This is really beautiful Joseph.
Lawrence Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 4:32 PM
Beautiful imagery!
Nance Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Oh this is a beauty of an image. Nicely done.
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 2:52 PM
beautiful imagery Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
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March 12, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Beautiful imagery, Joseph! Love, Kim
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