Bluebird

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                                         green, white, yellow blooms
                                        
                                         coupled songs of happiness

                                             warm sun sings glory

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John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 8:48 AM

Awesome display of your worthy talent Mitch. Congratulations on your success in Brian's contest. Agape, Moses

Noel Villarosa

March 28, 2010 at 12:39 AM

Congratulations on your HM on this contest, Mitch. (^_^) Noel.

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 27, 2010 at 8:00 PM

Congrats for the win

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2010 at 4:17 PM

Hey, a big congratulations to you. I'm so glad to see this happy poem in the winner's cricle. Luv, Andrea

March 25, 2010 at 1:58 PM

Reminds me of spring--my favorite season. You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 25, 2010 at 9:08 AM

Congrats Mitch on your HM in Brian's contest.. an excellent Haiku of great descriptive quality ..very vibrant and vivid in your lines...enjoy this special moment ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

March 25, 2010 at 2:25 AM

Mitch, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Brian Strand

March 25, 2010 at 2:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Mitch.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.

Brian Strand

March 23, 2010 at 4:47 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Mitch.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2010 at 8:48 PM

A bluebird kind of day presented in a lovely way. LUv, Andrea. ps. had you not heard the Lion song before? I sure wish I knew which singer he was. I lost the guy's autograph but I think he was one of the two Margo brothers of the original group.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

March 21, 2010 at 3:05 PM

Good job here. I admire people who can pull off these haikus as I find them very difficult. I'm glad that you liked my effort. It makes me proud to have anyone, but especially, from a fellow poet. Thank you very much. Regards, Gerard.

Sara Kendrick

March 18, 2010 at 5:15 PM

Interesting write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing.. We have Bluebirds here in our yard for we made birdhouses especially for them.. They are so interesting to watch..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

March 18, 2010 at 7:54 AM

A delightful image in your great haiku, Mitch! Well done! As for the "Aspercream," I don't know what it is, but it sounds like it could burn. Ouch! Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 18, 2010 at 4:45 AM

Mitch, reading your poetry today has been a pleasure. Thank you for sharing your words. This spring haiku is delightful. I have only seen a bluebird once years ago during a visit to West Virginia. It was so charming to watch it fly back and forth into a little birdhouse. (I've seen plenty of blue jays, though. even been bombarded when one fell out of its nest and I tried to help it.) Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann