Bluebird

call of the bluebird
flapping wings to attract mates
~ the ice receding

happiness blooming
life seeks a new perfect peace
~natures new dawning




Haiku x 2 - 12 February 2023
5-7-5 checked at howmanysyllables.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on this winning haiku in the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Larcs Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Thanks for your appreciation LL
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 1:05 PM
- Lovely written :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
Larcs Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 1:18 PM
You are so kind to connect and feedback Thanks LL
Kitchin Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 4:21 AM
LL, a lovely set of bluebird haiku's, congratulations on your winning placement!
Larcs Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Thanks for connecting LL
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