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Bluebird

found a dead bluebird on my street gently picked her up with tears buried her in God's firmament so soft noticed her shimmering soul, fly aloft

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Susan Ashley

Date: 5/6/2019 6:38:00 PM

A potent and poignant poem, Panagiota. I was swept up in its sad beauty, especially with the simply stunning last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/6/2019 6:50:00 PM

Welcome Susan! Those words hit me as well. Appreciate your input. Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/6/2019 4:54:00 PM

Nicely done my friend. A wow, but I do hope it is not true. I have never even SEEN a real bluebird.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/6/2019 5:05:00 PM

Put your mind to rest_ this was fictional only. My Poem about Lucey is real. Thank you for reading my attempts as growing as a poet. You have been a steadfast friend Panagiota

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/6/2019 4:43:00 PM

Blue-tifully done! You covered so much ground in just four lines, a whole short story's worth really. Two thumbs way up! (And congrats on supplanting me in the #3 position on the Top Community Poets Ladder!) Best always, Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/6/2019 5:01:00 PM

Yes, wish I only were so concise. I will accept your thumbs,))) You can count on me for support. Good for you. Panagiota