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Blueberry Skies

Her silhouette is draped in soft moonlight While an unseen sorrow cloaks her eyes With traces of a light lavender mist Hidden under dark blueberry skies She's oblivious to the lightning's dance Deaf to the sound of distant thunder As this cold blueberry sky bears witness To another heart torn asunder

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Tom Woody

Date: 2/20/2025 6:54:00 AM

Going over some of my faves. I remember this melancholy gem. So good

Randy Freie
Date: 2/20/2025 10:05:00 PM

Brother Tom, your support is greatly appreciated. I hope all is well in your universe.

Hiba Junaid

Date: 6/30/2024 10:56:00 AM

so pretty, so beautiful. i like the way you intertwine imagery with much too tangible emotion. feels as if the words were woven in blueberry love. if you meant to express heartbreak, my heart breaks for you reading these words, Randy. i hope you find the love you deserve.

Randy Freie
Date: 7/1/2024 2:10:00 AM

Thank you Hiba, I appreciate your kind words. But my heart isn't broken. Not for over forty years at least. I'm in my sixties now and am a happily single male. At this stage of my life I'm more concerned about keeping my heart healthy.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/19/2024 5:55:00 PM

Dear Randy, the tragic romance of your verse is so soulfully and beautifully expressed. Wonderfully atmospheric! A poignant gem and a fav! Write on bro! Warmest wishes.. ~lil sis

Randy Freie
Date: 5/20/2024 2:29:00 AM

Hi Susan, I was actually expressing my own past heartbreak, but I didn't want to sound like I was seeking sympathy. Again, any praise from you means so much. Thank you sis.

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/17/2024 3:35:00 PM

Beautiful metaphors and imagery in this fine poem, Randy. Very nice! :)

Randy Freie
Date: 5/17/2024 3:39:00 PM

Thank you Laura, I appreciate your feedback. It means a lot. Have a wonderful day.

Tom Woody

Date: 5/15/2024 6:51:00 PM

This is delightful. Absolutely awesome poetry and that's not fake praise. A fave for me

Tom Woody
Date: 5/18/2024 5:29:00 AM

This deserves Potd. Fosho

Randy Freie
Date: 5/15/2024 9:52:00 PM

Thanks Tom, coming from you, that's praise indeed. Most appreciated brother.