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Blue Water On Ledge

blue water on ledge
dribbling down vertical side…
mist forms at bottom

Russell Sivey

Contest: any haiku will do
Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A 

7/17/2013

waterhaiku

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Mitch White

July 23, 2013 at 5:47 AM

Nice form in this, grace-full. Congrats to you

Andrea Dietrich

July 22, 2013 at 11:36 PM

NIcely done, Russell. BIG congrats to you.

Debbie Guzzi

July 22, 2013 at 6:43 PM

nice visuals! good 2 part structure too. congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

July 22, 2013 at 4:56 PM

Sounds like you were sitting by a waterfall (or wading?)...Great observation and a very fine haiku... Congrats my friend! - Tim

Kash Poet

July 22, 2013 at 11:33 AM

Very nice Russell.Congrats on your win.

Connie Gildersleeve

July 22, 2013 at 6:35 AM

Russell congratulations on your fabulous haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

July 22, 2013 at 6:04 AM

Creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 22, 2013 at 1:05 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality, Russell - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tahera Mannan

July 21, 2013 at 10:51 PM

Superb. Many congrats Russell.

Poet Destroyer A

July 21, 2013 at 7:58 PM

Hello Russell :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**