Carrie Richards Poet Verse

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Blue Summer Skies

As  
summer  
bled   
softer 
shades of blue, 
and sun 
spread  
pillows   
for my head...  
the clouds tread by...

Threads of white,   
now stirred 
by 
the sure  
breath of wind,  
will soon   
shred 
into 
blue   

 


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6/30/15 "Waltzing With Color"
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Poet Destroyer A July 22, 2015 at 11:57 PM Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2015 at 4:29 PM The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2015 at 3:36 PM shred into blue. TOO COOL, Carrie and big Congrats on your win with this creative entry.

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 3:23 PM CARRIE, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT

Jan Allison July 19, 2015 at 5:11 AM such beautiful imagery many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper July 19, 2015 at 1:32 AM Beautiful write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Lee Carter July 18, 2015 at 11:35 PM Love your poem Carrie congrats !

Kim Merryman July 18, 2015 at 11:08 PM Carrie, beautiful imagery and I especially like the part about the clouds being pillows! Great flow to your words! Congrats on your 3rd place win and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A July 1, 2015 at 1:47 AM This is perfect Carrie, nothing better than a shade of blue, nice and refreshing... LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 30, 2015 at 10:30 PM Amazingly beautiful Carrie! Gl in contest!

Sneha Rv June 30, 2015 at 8:19 PM This is really lovely!! All the best for the contest!! :D :D