Blue Solitude

Well, my young hero, looks like
we've accomplished it again,
steel ships on dark seas passing,
blown by silent phantom winds.

I glimpsed your peaceful face
as you, in innocence, slept.
More child than man, unaware
of the tears your father's wept.

Your talent gives you power:
you are more than just his son,
he fears you and fears for you,
sweet enigma, conundrum.

The stoic, I fear nothing,
in blue solitude I mourn
my past, my now, my future,
my own self-inflicted scorn.

Reticent, I bang my head,
rhythmic beat I cannot stop,
wry humor at the thought that
just maybe...it will pop.


©Danielle White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 9:40 AM
please DO NOT! pop that head! loved this line "sweet enigma, conundrum." Light & Love and hope all is well!
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October 19, 2009 at 6:17 PM
Hi Danielle .. I received your message about my entry Halfway in my Soup inbox .. I have made the correction and listed it under rhyme .. let me know if its ok now.. also luv your poem Blue Solitutde .. very nice message and flow ... Linda-Marie ...
Culverhouse Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 7:19 AM
pop the melon, it would be like humpty dumpty:)
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 6:12 AM
Thank you for this most enjoyable read Danielle. Love, Carol
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October 18, 2009 at 2:36 PM
Nice rhyme, great words.
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Interesting and good Rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
Tomas Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 2:34 PM
me drink this pint of beer to your success
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