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Blue Solitude

Well, my young hero, looks like we've accomplished it again, steel ships on dark seas passing, blown by silent phantom winds. I glimpsed your peaceful face as you, in innocence, slept. More child than man, unaware of the tears your father's wept. Your talent gives you power: you are more than just his son, he fears you and fears for you, sweet enigma, conundrum. The stoic, I fear nothing, in blue solitude I mourn my past, my now, my future, my own self-inflicted scorn. Reticent, I bang my head, rhythmic beat I cannot stop, wry humor at the thought that just maybe...it will pop. ©Danielle White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/21/2009 9:40:00 AM
please DO NOT! pop that head! loved this line "sweet enigma, conundrum." Light & Love and hope all is well!
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Date: 10/19/2009 6:17:00 PM
Hi Danielle .. I received your message about my entry Halfway in my Soup inbox .. I have made the correction and listed it under rhyme .. let me know if its ok now.. also luv your poem Blue Solitutde .. very nice message and flow ... Linda-Marie ...
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Date: 10/19/2009 7:19:00 AM
pop the melon, it would be like humpty dumpty:)
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Date: 10/19/2009 6:12:00 AM
Thank you for this most enjoyable read Danielle. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 2:36:00 PM
Nice rhyme, great words.
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Date: 10/18/2009 2:35:00 PM
Interesting and good Rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/18/2009 2:34:00 PM
me drink this pint of beer to your success
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