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Blue Snow

Standing here all I can feel is the wind blowing away my memories of our friendship, reveries and sacred compassion. Standing here all I can see is a fading shadow walking further away from me. Standing here all I can hear is nothing but silent echoes of your charming voice. Standing here all I can sense is blue snow slowly running down my tender skin, all I can feel is a numbing pain for loss has consumed my inner fire, slowly dimming like the stars at night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 4:22:00 PM
Your talents amaze me.
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:47:00 AM
very interesting piece of work Leighann, it ( along with some other poems of yours) reminds me of much of the poetryof Irish poet PATRICK KAVANAGH....perhaps you are familiar with his work or even like it??..... well done...best wishes ...Syd
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