Blue Shawl

Blue shawl unfurls
Furls spreading white fringes
Waves covering the cold shore

6.7.2021
HAIKU- FIRST PLACE

seawinterhaiku

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Kim Merryman

July 8, 2021 at 8:00 PM

Creative imagery! Congrats on your win, Carol! Blessings, Kim M

Brian Sambourne

July 7, 2021 at 11:49 AM

Strong haiku with a nifty shift in the third line. I like the shawl to sea image. (Metaphorically, the cold shore suggests frail, female shoulders - but I may be way off base). So well penned, Carol. Cheers, Brian

Carol Mitra

July 7, 2021 at 6:46 PM

True Brian....You can read it exactly that way :) Thank you.

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