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Blue shawl unfurls Furls spreading white fringes Waves covering the cold shore 6.7.2021 HAIKU- FIRST PLACE

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Date: 7/8/2021 8:00:00 PM
Creative imagery! Congrats on your win, Carol! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/8/2021 11:59:00 AM
Lovely metaphor for a fine haiku win, Carol. And haiku are not easy to do! Congratulations. Carol Louise
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Carol Mitra
Date: 7/8/2021 7:37:00 PM
Thank you Louise...much appreciated :)
Date: 7/7/2021 11:49:00 AM
Strong haiku with a nifty shift in the third line. I like the shawl to sea image. (Metaphorically, the cold shore suggests frail, female shoulders - but I may be way off base). So well penned, Carol. Cheers, Brian
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Carol Mitra
Date: 7/7/2021 6:46:00 PM
True Brian....You can read it exactly that way :) Thank you.