Blue Ribbon Affair

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*Image of Blue Jay by Pixabay. blue ribbon affair picturesque blue skies flights bands of blue jays alight blueberries brambles 2020 August 22 *7th Place* Haiku - Color with Alliteration ~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2020 August 27

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/28/2020 2:22:00 AM

Hello William sir, I enjoyed your Haiku very much.. Beautiful imagery with pleasant alliteration.:-) Loved the last last line~ blueberries brambles.. Congratulations on your win. Keep inspiring and keep glowing..:-) Have a great day.Take care.Warm regards.Mahalo( learnt a new word to respond to your Aloha!!!:-)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/28/2020 8:33:00 AM

Thanks, Deepa, much appreciated for your assessments and respects my friend, Aloha! William

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/27/2020 6:45:00 AM

William, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, love the blue imagery!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 9:07:00 AM

Thanks for the opportunity, Tania, and my placement, Aloha! William

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/23/2020 5:02:00 AM

Lovely caress of whispering azure visions... Love it. God bless you

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/23/2020 5:14:00 AM

A joyous welcome of words, Regina, have blessed day, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2020 3:24:00 AM

- Beautiful ... I use blueberries in mine too :) - Best wishes in the contest, William :) - Have a wonderful Sunday :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/23/2020 5:09:00 AM

I do love blueberries, Anne-Lise,, thank you for the encouragement and likewise, Aloha! William