Blue Ribbon Affair

*Image of Blue Jay by Pixabay.
blue ribbon affair

picturesque blue skies
flights bands of blue jays alight 
blueberries brambles

2020 August 22
*7th Place*
Haiku - Color with Alliteration
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2020 August 27

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V. Deepa

August 28, 2020 at 2:22 AM

Hello William sir, I enjoyed your Haiku very much.. Beautiful imagery with pleasant alliteration.:-) Loved the last last line~ blueberries brambles.. Congratulations on your win. Keep inspiring and keep glowing..:-) Have a great day.Take care.Warm regards.Mahalo( learnt a new word to respond to your Aloha!!!:-)

William Kelii Kekaula

August 28, 2020 at 8:33 AM

Thanks, Deepa, much appreciated for your assessments and respects my friend, Aloha! William