Blue Mountains Gully

Yellow crops of sandstone,
Jagged mountain peak,
Red display of waratahs,
A meandering bush creek.

White display of flannel flowers,
Bottlebrush with orange cones,
Beautiful fronds of tree ferns,
Blue gums with crafted tones.

A frolicking roll of mountain mist,
An ancient windswept cave,
Green moss upon the velvet rocks,
Falling gum leaf gives a wave.

The tinkling sounds of bellbirds
Run echoes round the stream,
A yellow-tailed cockatoo
Circles back to where it's been.

The buzzing of a bush-bee
Comes from near a fallen log,
A croaking sound pervading
It's a golden striped tree frog.

This bush display persistent,
Wallaby nibbles grass nearby,
A lyrebird shyly into view,
Kookaburras sit in branches high.

The melodic sounds continue,
Chirping birds with colored plume,
Gorge of coolness calling,
Mountain gully, nature's loom.


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Date: 6/3/2016 11:17:00 AM
Nice writing. I like the words and the rhyme.
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Date: 6/1/2016 10:15:00 PM
Picturesque descriptions of the natural world -- Darwin would be proud. Better than a camera (sometimes)....
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Date: 8/22/2015 10:53:00 AM
Really loved this, John. Australian poets I see have that common gift awesome imagery in your poetry. An awesome nature piece. 7. hugs!
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John Williams
Date: 8/23/2015 2:16:00 AM
Hello Kim, Thank you for your lovely comment. I think this is my favourite Bush Poem. An economy of words quite often says so much. I used to climb mountain gullies from the age of 9. ......kind regards=======John
Date: 2/23/2015 3:29:00 PM
Nice rhyme, John. Interesting to me to read about the things you see and hear in your country, so different from here.
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/24/2015 6:08:00 AM
We are in the United States. Such weather we're having! But we are centrally located, and have escaped most of the ice storms here. My husband fired up the tractor and plowed our gravel road, so we made it to church on Sunday. But the writers' meeting on Saturday was cancelled. Looking forward to spring.
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John Williams
Date: 2/23/2015 6:50:00 PM
Hi Conan, What country are you from? Thank you for reading my poem. John
Date: 1/2/2015 12:35:00 AM
G'day John... observing and putting into verse that rhymes is not an easy task, but you've done it well John. I was waiting for a tiger snake or a death adder to add a bit of spice though. (joke) Regards-Lindsay
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:52:00 PM
Brilliant poem!! Superbly penned!! I was transported from the very first line to a strange new world full of spellbinding colour and vibrancy...Excellent!! :) john. P.s I have "faved" this poem.
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:39:00 PM
Lovely piece that transport me to a beautiful commune with nature in all its wonderful glory! Excellent write with amazing imagery! Pandita
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:10:00 AM
Love it Mate.... great work
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