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Blue Mountain Tears

Blue Mountain Tears

fallen angel wing
upon still crystal water
frozen peaks loom

deborah burch©
07/04/2012

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Date: 7/16/2012 3:39:00 AM
Hi Deb, stopping by to wish you a happy good night.. nice poem~ LUV*PD
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Date: 7/13/2012 12:59:00 AM
oh, another one of my favorites here. Congrats. this is truly a nice one.
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Date: 7/12/2012 10:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 7/12/2012 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 7:27:00 AM
Cap'n Deb super congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:58:00 PM
Deborah, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD
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Date: 7/11/2012 6:55:00 AM
I agree with Tim. The imagery of that peak with its fallen angel wing is WOW
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Date: 7/8/2012 1:36:00 PM
A stunning piece of work, Deborah. The body is elegant, but the title is the real kicker for me - Tim
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Date: 7/8/2012 10:10:00 AM
Stunning imagery Deborah ;) how are you doing? Hope your weekend is a great one, love Wilma
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Date: 7/5/2012 9:25:00 PM
thank you for the support... always~pd
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Date: 7/5/2012 5:03:00 PM
Cap'n Deb, excellent work, I like...David
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Date: 7/5/2012 2:52:00 PM
Very good haiku here Deborah.Best wishes to you.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/5/2012 3:20:00 PM
:) thank you Kash! I am honoured ...hugss, love ya , deb
Date: 7/5/2012 1:32:00 PM
What a gorgeous, cool write my friend! The temperature must be frigid at this mountain, the image you paint gives a cold lake vision! This is a beautiful poem Deborah! Great Work!!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 7/5/2012 1:58:00 PM
dear Russell, you are such a doll...:) thank you sooo much ....huggsss, love ya, deb