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Blue Mountain Tears

Blue Mountain Tears

fallen angel wing
upon still crystal water
frozen peaks loom

deborah burch©
07/04/2012

allegoryfantasynaturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 16, 2012 at 3:39 AM

Hi Deb, stopping by to wish you a happy good night.. nice poem~ LUV*PD

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2012 at 12:59 AM

oh, another one of my favorites here. Congrats. this is truly a nice one.

Marty Owens

July 12, 2012 at 10:24 AM

Congrats on your win in the Mountain Haiku contest...enjoyed reading...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 12, 2012 at 7:44 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku Mountain Week" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

David Williams

July 12, 2012 at 7:27 AM

Cap'n Deb super congrats on your win, love it..David

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2012 at 7:58 PM

Deborah, congratulations with your awesome win ;-) thank you for supporting my contest~ sending hugs your way~LUV*PD

Andrea Dietrich

July 11, 2012 at 6:55 AM

I agree with Tim. The imagery of that peak with its fallen angel wing is WOW

Tim Ryerson

July 8, 2012 at 1:36 PM

A stunning piece of work, Deborah. The body is elegant, but the title is the real kicker for me - Tim

Wilma Neels

July 8, 2012 at 10:10 AM

Stunning imagery Deborah ;) how are you doing? Hope your weekend is a great one, love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

July 5, 2012 at 9:25 PM

thank you for the support... always~pd

David Williams

July 5, 2012 at 5:03 PM

Cap'n Deb, excellent work, I like...David

Kash Poet

July 5, 2012 at 2:52 PM

Very good haiku here Deborah.Best wishes to you.

Deborah Burch

July 5, 2012 at 3:20 PM

:) thank you Kash! I am honoured ...hugss, love ya , deb

Russell Sivey

July 5, 2012 at 1:32 PM

What a gorgeous, cool write my friend! The temperature must be frigid at this mountain, the image you paint gives a cold lake vision! This is a beautiful poem Deborah! Great Work!!

Deborah Burch

July 5, 2012 at 1:58 PM

dear Russell, you are such a doll...:) thank you sooo much ....huggsss, love ya, deb

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