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Blue Monday

BLUE MONDAY B ereft of life bequeathed wIth loss for ware L ove cAme, then vanished, like it wasn't THERE U nder a Mask i Hide wherE no smile IS E ach day Reliving past Events long STILL M y inNer strength, it sEems, has lost all HOPE O Verall i'm at the End...of my Rope N othing's Left for mE, but: 'do i or DON'T' D id hamleT still have anything to GIVE A gainst the torment lanGuished...he gave UP Y outh now is gOne and without love...so i ! 1.12.2017©deborah burch Form: acrostic (with several messages acrostically placed within) Theme: suicide awareness, hope *note: bold not working so puzzle letters/words are in CAPITALS !! *to fellow poet readers, please note this is for awareness only...I am fine;)

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Date: 1/22/2017 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Deb! Great double hidden message! :-)
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:00:00 PM
Hang in there Glad to know you can relate but you're o.k. Congrats, Deb.
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Date: 1/21/2017 5:26:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Deb
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Date: 1/21/2017 4:58:00 PM
I had no doubt you were fine, Deborah...I cannot imagine you without that captivating smile:) Your Blue Monday is a sad but delightful winning entry, so...congratulations!! Regards & hugs // paul
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Date: 1/21/2017 4:10:00 PM
excellent acrostic and message Deb many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2017 3:17:00 PM
We all know of people that suffer like this! You've fashioned lovely words of hope that the weary long to hear! Congrats, Deborah!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/21/2017 3:24:00 PM
Thank you for your encouragement and kindness Kim!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Date: 1/16/2017 3:20:00 PM
Very creative and a great message Deb. You did a wonderful job writing for this challenging contest. Good luck my friend.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/16/2017 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Chris!!! Always appreciate your kindness!! Big Hugggs.

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