Blue Melody

If this is another melody
A song of the sad and blue
It'd do no good to feel sympathy
The same really goes for you
My head is spinning softly
With words I can't comprehend
Thoughts I don't recommend
Memories I'd love to lend
My hands are moving swiftly
I just want the song to end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 3, 2013 at 10:34 PM
Juli, a nice little note, and rhyming poem... hope the sad tune goes away... enjoyed..Linda
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August 23, 2013 at 2:57 PM
My father would tell me: "Never dedicate a love song to somebody in a relationship. If it ends, you have one less piece of music you can enjoy". Crazy good job you did on this!
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August 23, 2013 at 11:36 AM
- Oh .... so sad .... sing a happy pink melody.. - Wishing you a beautiful weekend .... Relax! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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