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Blue Melody

If this is another melody A song of the sad and blue It'd do no good to feel sympathy The same really goes for you My head is spinning softly With words I can't comprehend Thoughts I don't recommend Memories I'd love to lend My hands are moving swiftly I just want the song to end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/3/2013 10:34:00 PM
Juli, a nice little note, and rhyming poem... hope the sad tune goes away... enjoyed..Linda
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Date: 8/23/2013 2:57:00 PM
My father would tell me: "Never dedicate a love song to somebody in a relationship. If it ends, you have one less piece of music you can enjoy". Crazy good job you did on this!
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Date: 8/23/2013 11:36:00 AM
- Oh .... so sad .... sing a happy pink melody.. - Wishing you a beautiful weekend .... Relax! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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