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Blue Lagoon

Blue lagoon
                                                       
                                                       Gulp air
                                                   icy waters inviting
                                                Fight the vicious current


                                         Bursting lungs hasten your powerful struggle
                                         Past the point of no return, you swim or die 
                                         Through waters haze - the light of candles

                                                        Isle of Capri
                                                        Blue lagoon






                                                       08/06/2014
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Jan Allison

Date: 6/9/2014 1:02:00 AM

Love it Darren ! Isle of Capri reminds me of Gracie Fields song my parents used to play. hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 1:11:00 PM

Good afternoon Darren, I miss the soup, and the few friends I've made here these past few weeks... :) I love this body of water, The imagery is kind of romantic, even though it might end in death... enjoyed...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 1:06:00 PM

double soup mail....