Blue Jays Vs Cardinals

bottom of the ninth two on, two out, two strikes the windup, the pitch.......... John G. Lawless 1/18/2020

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Eric Cohen

Date: 3/5/2021 9:17:00 PM

Can't believe Spring training is upon us. But where are the Orioles? (Or the "Os" as we call them at Camden Yards.)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2021 10:07:00 PM

Guess this could be baseball, So Clever in a short poem. Stay Safe. Harry

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/18/2021 5:21:00 PM

So clever + humorous. Really enjoy your sharp, short lines. They pack a punch (or knock the ball out of the park). Best wishes, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2021 12:39:00 PM

Ha!! Love this. I wonder if it would be eligible in the bird contest! By the way, thanks so much for my win with a poem that I felt really good about. It means a lot.

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/18/2021 10:33:00 AM

Lolol I would never have thought to do one this way! Nice John!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 1/18/2021 8:46:00 AM

This chickadee is squealing ;D,

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/18/2021 7:56:00 AM

and the chickadees chirped loudly from the stands as Casey Cardinal struck out!