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Blue Jays Vs Cardinals

bottom of the ninth
two on, two out, two strikes
the windup, the pitch..........


John G. Lawless
1/18/2020

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Eric Cohen

March 5, 2021 at 9:17 PM

Can't believe Spring training is upon us. But where are the Orioles? (Or the "Os" as we call them at Camden Yards.)

Harry Horsman

January 19, 2021 at 10:07 PM

Guess this could be baseball, So Clever in a short poem. Stay Safe. Harry

Brian Sambourne

January 18, 2021 at 5:21 PM

So clever + humorous. Really enjoy your sharp, short lines. They pack a punch (or knock the ball out of the park). Best wishes, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2021 at 12:39 PM

Ha!! Love this. I wonder if it would be eligible in the bird contest! By the way, thanks so much for my win with a poem that I felt really good about. It means a lot.