Notes About The Poem

Contest: Bird Haiku Set of Two contest

sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Date 6/16/26

blue jays

blue jays

sassy and vocal
blue jays announce their presence~
other birds must leave

party of blue jays 
congregate at the feeder~
they are in control

(Party is the term for a flock or group of blue jays)
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 8:38 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "blue jays" write again. I Have been off Soup for 2 weeks. I needed an Ink Transfusion. Hahaha!!! Now back and ready to go Writing Away. Have a blessed day with your win.............
Mckeithan Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 10:27 AM
Thanks Paula. It is good to take a break. Glad to see you back.
Kitchin Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 6:32 AM
Oliver, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku set.
Mckeithan Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Tania
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 12:30 PM
I  enjoyed reading your fun "blue jays" write. I have watched them dive bomb animals. None here. We had them at our last home. "Good Luck"  I did, "red cardinals." Have a great day writing away................
Mckeithan Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 12:33 PM
Thanks Paula. We used to feed birds-in fact we tried twice and had all kinds of birds. Unfortunately we had bear on 2 different occasions show and destroy all the feeders so we stopped feeding them.
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