Blue Jay Deejay

flurry of wings perch
blue white foam flits breezy leaves     
soft call of deejay 


13th May 2020

Sponsor	Tania Kitchin
Contest Name	Haiku - Blue Jay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Brul Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 5:14 PM
Such a sublime Haiku. I love reading this again and again. To my faves..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Back with congratulations Debjani! xomo :),
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 4:20 PM
Debjani, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku!
Mishra Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 12:15 PM
Deejay sounds so you for blue jays, especially love the "blue white foam flits breezy leaves". Congratulations :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 9:48 PM
I love your title! Have blue jays all over here, I'm so going to think of that when I see them next. Good luck in the contest! xomo
Mitra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 10:38 PM
Aha.so lucky I have never seen them
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