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Blue Jay Deejay

flurry of wings perch blue white foam flits breezy leaves soft call of deejay 13th May 2020 Sponsor Tania Kitchin Contest Name Haiku - Blue Jay

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Jcb Brul

Date: 5/16/2020 5:14:00 PM

Such a sublime Haiku. I love reading this again and again. To my faves..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/15/2020 12:09:00 PM

Back with congratulations Debjani! xomo :),

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/14/2020 4:20:00 PM

Debjani, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 12:15:00 PM

Deejay sounds so you for blue jays, especially love the "blue white foam flits breezy leaves". Congratulations :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/12/2020 9:48:00 PM

I love your title! Have blue jays all over here, I'm so going to think of that when I see them next. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/12/2020 10:38:00 PM

Aha.so lucky I have never seen them