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BLUE JAY (Haiku) fly fly away jay blend on wing with april sky so clear so blue flly!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 6/6/2010 3:46:00 PM
I enjoyed this very lighthearted haiku, Daver :)--just an extra "l" on that last "fly"--btw for that Roundabout sijo of mine--yup that plan definitely backfired! thanks for all your comments --nikko :)
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Date: 4/19/2010 11:05:00 AM
Daver this is as unique a Haiku as I've ever seen. You should enter this gem in a contest. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/17/2010 8:01:00 PM
Enjoyed this haiku of yours also thanks for your nice comment like always. SKAT.
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Date: 4/17/2010 6:48:00 PM
So fitting for spring. After winter, it sure is good see the birds back again. Thank you for this uplifting view and for your kind comment. Enjoyed reading this poem again. Karen
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Date: 4/13/2010 3:46:00 PM
Daver, I thought I may have not had enough room in the first post. I like your poem about your cat, Ebony and his love for tuna. It’s interesting because I only have dogs, but they adore tuna as well. What is it about tuna that they love so much? Sometimes we put a little tuna into the regular dog food to make it tastier. I also like your beautiful Haiku about blue jays. We have many of them on our tree farm in Canada. Love, Amy.
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Date: 4/13/2010 3:42:00 PM
Dear Daver, thanks for Reading my poem. I haven’t seen the movie you mentioned, but I would like to. I think I have found someone with similar tastes at last. I adore Monti's Czardas and all Czardas. Also love the violin and balalaika. Music like that is fantastic, and it was a Czardas that inspired this poem. :) See next post.
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Date: 4/10/2010 2:44:00 PM
spring's nice! light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:11:00 AM
You have me smiling with this one. Birds can be so fascinating. Keep on writing. Have a good weekend. Karen
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:42:00 PM
Well penned haiku. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:58:00 PM
Sweet, Daver, I did one very similar to this with the word "fly" but I talked about crows that were all covering my back yard and they rose up as one when I opened the door and flew away! Soupmail
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Date: 4/9/2010 11:27:00 AM
Great descriptive write....The spring sky is so clear on a cloudless day...Sara
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:41:00 AM
very nicely penned!! enjoyed today!!
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