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Blue Glow

Braving storms, push and pull piercing my Parched soul, while glazed in flaxen mists Framing lingering dew drops Consoling my warped core, As I drift amidst Sweeping mistrals Calling me To the Blue Glow Of our Ocean home, Swaying to tides Eclipsed by sundered Coral sighs glistening Upon glossed ripples bleeding Devout love encompassing my Frigid heart, seeking the warmth of you.

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Nik Canada7

Date: 12/21/2023 10:53:00 PM

i'm proud and happy for you amore?, you deep breathtaking words show me your grace and beauty in your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.You are a paintress with the palette of your seraphic majestic aura painting your sapphire emotion with bright colors and shades of grace and elegance,my Korean prinncess. You are my poetry in my heart for eternity,mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito sempre amore mio i love you deeply micia.il nostro eterno amore

Silent One

Date: 12/21/2023 1:10:00 PM

This one was done so well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Ink Empress

Date: 12/21/2023 3:55:00 AM

My beautiful soul sis this resonates on so many levels and you know exactly what i would like to read, so you did a double nonet that flows so well with not just descriptive diction but such soulful and moving emotions, from the very first line as you mentioned push and pull i couldnt help but resonate. And i also love how you’ve written “ Glow Of our Ocean home,Swaying to tides Eclipsed by sundered Coral sighs glistening” wow! That’s absolutely stunning! Creative wordplay! Congratulations!!!

Silent One

Date: 12/18/2023 1:21:00 PM

So sweet of your to support Ink in her contest... Again you write so well and you always choose the right words to express your perspective... a heart will be frigid when lonely and without the beloved.. good luck in the contest..

Tom Woody

Date: 12/17/2023 6:44:00 PM

Mermaid? Anyway, cool nonetski FSS

Nik Canada7

Date: 12/17/2023 5:29:00 PM

love this so much amore? your deep intense show me your depth within your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. You are a rare special being and i will always be by your side being your everything walking hand in hand towards amidst the life storms and gravitational current,illuminanting your soul, feeling your profundity,my korean princess. mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio. i love you deeply micia ..mia passione per sempre ..tuo..il nostro eterno amore

Mat Ignacio

Date: 12/17/2023 5:26:00 PM

beautiful -