Blue Flame

Dancing on the coals
It curls its ribbon of blue
Hypnotic wonder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spence Sr Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 5:12 PM
This is such an excellent haiku. It's like being in India and watching a guru dancing on the hot coals. The imagery is just awesome. Great job! Joseph
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July 2, 2010 at 1:33 PM
enjoyed reading today!
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July 2, 2010 at 10:10 AM
ohh,, cool write ,, nice..P.D.
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