Blue Eyes

Into her blue eyes
I can hear the waves crashing
     And smell the ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 5:19 AM
oh how romantic a haiku Elijah:-) hugs jan xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 6:23 PM
Hi Elijah, Welcome to PS! Your poem is beautiful and romantic. I hope you will continue to share your poetry here, and just a tip: the best way to get other poet's to comment on your work is to read and comment on their pages. Lots of luck, Rhonda
Johnson Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thanks Rhonda, I look forward to reading everyone's poetry.
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