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Blue Eyes

Into her blue eyes I can hear the waves crashing And smell the ocean

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 2/17/2017 5:19:00 AM
oh how romantic a haiku Elijah:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/15/2017 6:23:00 PM
Hi Elijah, Welcome to PS! Your poem is beautiful and romantic. I hope you will continue to share your poetry here, and just a tip: the best way to get other poet's to comment on your work is to read and comment on their pages. Lots of luck, Rhonda
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Elijah Johnson
Date: 2/16/2017 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda, I look forward to reading everyone's poetry.