Blue Eyes

Blue eyes that stand before me,
Seeing all that has come to be.
Never did those blue eyes turn away,
Even in the troubles that may.
They did not turn in any way,
More beautiful than the sunny days of may,
If there was any doubt in them, i could not say.
Always love they did send,
I couldnt have asked for a better friend
But i didnt know you loved me until the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 8, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Blue eyes are awesome, majestic and good-looking. Rating this a 7 and another favourite. Thanks a bill for posting yet another work of art. These three lines though are epic: "They did not turn in any way, More beautiful than the sunny days of may, If there was any doubt in them, i could not say." - the whole thing, in general, is an easy read and delightful no doubt! -DWB
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June 15, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Thank you David this poem is very close to my heart....-Love Ettie
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