Blue Eyes

Let the erotic flower bloom in the stormy waves of pink heart
Let the purified verse of the conjugal life come to the breaths
Let the autumnal drizzling flutters to the window of romance

©Mahtab Bangalee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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ambasta Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 10:20 PM
Wow !! Just amazing
Bangalee Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 10:33 PM
Thanks dear Poet
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 4:52 AM
lovely ~
Bangalee Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 5:36 AM
Thanks dear poet for your kind words
Buhagiar Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 1:12 AM
I have never written a sijo. My poems tend to be a bit long. You have written a wonderful example. Well done.
Bangalee Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 1:56 AM
Thanks Dear Poet for your kind words
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