Blue Eyed Raven

Blue Eyed Raven
A walk along the narrow path way while I was
knocking
on heavens door about 
my lifes journey.

Saw a blue eyed raven in the night one of Gods
way of saying everythings going to be alright.

I turned the other way and no longer felt the
target on
my heart,I was now ready for cupids
arrow.

For rest of my yesterdays,The sorrow no longer felt
so
heavy,I'm saving this place for just in case.

I need my blue eyed raven to show his face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 3, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Cheryl, I love the concept of a "blue-eyed raven" who guides you along the path of life. Good poem! Carolyn
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