Blue Eyed Lover

I saw you lying next to me
                                           my eyes turned moist.
                                         My lonely isolated heart 
                                            found your embrace.
                                          all promises were fulfilled
                                           how dearly we  made love 
                                          the fire that was raging within us
                                                your flirtatious move
                                                 how can I forget
                                               my blue-eyed lover
                                                  you will be  forever
                                                 a part of my dream    
                                                        

                                                              RED
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 1:16 AM
Very tender hearted and sweet, Red. And hey, I got blue eyes ... Didn't know this was how you felt about me ;)
Fiery Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 12:04 AM
I liked this comment...can I fav this ? Hugs
Hull Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Passionate and tender, as all Love should be.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Hi Red, I just wanted to say thanks for all your positive comments. They are appreciated. Hugs Rick.
A   Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 8:48 PM
Hi Red, wow... what a dream, of passion... I had a blue eyed lover 8 years ago... enjoyed stopping by tonight... Linda
Fiery Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 8:50 PM
thank you Linda..:) you are an amazing poetess..* Hugs*
Mcdaid Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 5:28 AM
BEAUTIFUL WORDS FLOWED OUT FROM YOUR DREAMING HEART
Fiery Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 8:51 PM
thank you liam...i have read ur poems , they are lovely too...
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Hi Red, thanks for the birthday greeting.
Fiery Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 8:52 PM
* Hugs* Richard...:)
Breidenthal Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 3:34 AM
Touching write here. Thanks for stopping by; it means a lot! Always, Laura
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 7:45 AM
Dropping by to wish you a wonderful and fiery day Red!
Anglesey Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 6:24 AM
I very sweet dreamy poem. Nicely expressed :)
Babu Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:09 AM
NICE ONE............. RED FIERY
Lamoureux Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Good morning, I am now the 100th person to read your poem. Have a great day. Enjoyed reading it again. Ready for a new one Red!
Fiery Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Thank you so much Richard...much appreciated :)
Boskovski Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Wow so powerful and very beautiful and a bit, erotic! I love it! I once had a blue eyed lover of the female species! Till she slipped away and was lost forever... :( anyway! I love it, great write Red. Love from your fellow poet and friend! - Christopher!! xoxoxo :)
Nair Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 11:25 PM
These words are even more sensuous than the touch-Well expressed-
J.T. Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Nice write. keep the pen handy
Lamoureux Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 4:20 PM
Hi Red dropped by to say hello.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 3:14 PM
so sweet. I am trying to remember if I ever had a blue eyed lover. hmmm, well there is my husband. he has blue eyes. hahaha (I was thinking of all my old boyfriends and remembering all the ones with brown eyes!!)
Tacito Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 12:20 AM
I'm ok with dreams like. I'll be more ok when it actually happens. :) Nicely written!
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 5:19 AM
- A sweet and romantic love poem, Red. - Lovely! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Fiery Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 10:38 PM
thank you Anne:)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 2:11 AM
Sounds like a very satisfying dream.
Fiery Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 7:15 AM
yes only in dreams...:)
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