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Blue Eyed Lover

I saw you lying next to me
                                           my eyes turned moist.
                                         My lonely isolated heart 
                                            found your embrace.
                                          all promises were fulfilled
                                           how dearly we  made love 
                                          the fire that was raging within us
                                                your flirtatious move
                                                 how can I forget
                                               my blue-eyed lover
                                                  you will be  forever
                                                 a part of my dream    
                                                        

                                                              RED

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/11/2016 1:16:00 AM

Very tender hearted and sweet, Red. And hey, I got blue eyes ... Didn't know this was how you felt about me ;)

Red Fiery
Date: 8/23/2016 12:04:00 AM

I liked this comment...can I fav this ? Hugs

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 9:58:00 AM

Passionate and tender, as all Love should be.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/24/2013 8:16:00 PM

Hi Red, I just wanted to say thanks for all your positive comments. They are appreciated. Hugs Rick.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2013 8:48:00 PM

Hi Red, wow... what a dream, of passion... I had a blue eyed lover 8 years ago... enjoyed stopping by tonight... Linda

Red Fiery
Date: 9/10/2013 8:50:00 PM

thank you Linda..:) you are an amazing poetess..* Hugs*

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/10/2013 5:28:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL WORDS FLOWED OUT FROM YOUR DREAMING HEART

Red Fiery
Date: 9/10/2013 8:51:00 PM

thank you liam...i have read ur poems , they are lovely too...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2013 3:16:00 PM

Hi Red, thanks for the birthday greeting.

Red Fiery
Date: 9/10/2013 8:52:00 PM

* Hugs* Richard...:)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/9/2013 3:34:00 AM

Touching write here. Thanks for stopping by; it means a lot! Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/4/2013 7:45:00 AM

Dropping by to wish you a wonderful and fiery day Red!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/27/2013 6:24:00 AM

I very sweet dreamy poem. Nicely expressed :)

Yadhu Babu

Date: 8/27/2013 2:09:00 AM

NICE ONE............. RED FIERY

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/26/2013 8:55:00 AM

Good morning, I am now the 100th person to read your poem. Have a great day. Enjoyed reading it again. Ready for a new one Red!

Red Fiery
Date: 8/26/2013 9:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Richard...much appreciated :)

Chris Boskovski

Date: 8/25/2013 12:06:00 AM

Wow so powerful and very beautiful and a bit, erotic! I love it! I once had a blue eyed lover of the female species! Till she slipped away and was lost forever... :( anyway! I love it, great write Red. Love from your fellow poet and friend! - Christopher!! xoxoxo :)

Vijay Nair

Date: 8/24/2013 11:25:00 PM

These words are even more sensuous than the touch-Well expressed-

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/22/2013 1:10:00 PM

Nice write. keep the pen handy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/21/2013 4:20:00 PM

Hi Red dropped by to say hello.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2013 3:14:00 PM

so sweet. I am trying to remember if I ever had a blue eyed lover. hmmm, well there is my husband. he has blue eyes. hahaha (I was thinking of all my old boyfriends and remembering all the ones with brown eyes!!)