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Blue Escape

Looking out over the cliff to the waters azure, Pondering life’s questions that are so unsure. On the ocean waves floats all my dreams, While washing away my fears or so it seems. Morning light on the ocean produces a sapphire hue, While the water on blades of grass is a clear dew. The scenes seem so peaceful and full of grace, It just eases my soul and slows down my pace. Its quiet hypnotic trance produced seems to heal, Escaping the reality of life for a time is its appeal. Suddenly the wind churns the waters indigo blue, Human awareness returns to the things I knew.
Written July 29, 2012 For Francine Robert’s contest “On the ocean waves” Won 9th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 10:11:00 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Lee. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 10:13:00 AM
Breathtaking beauty, Lee! Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/5/2012 10:40:00 AM
thank you so much for your kind comments. Lee
Date: 8/3/2012 4:46:00 PM
congrats on your win Lee
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/5/2012 10:40:00 AM
thank you Lee
Date: 8/3/2012 1:45:00 PM
Congrats! A wonderful escape it is! :) Tanya
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/5/2012 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback. Lee
Date: 8/3/2012 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations Lee xx
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/5/2012 10:41:00 AM
thank you Lee
Date: 8/1/2012 5:00:00 PM
great work...the ocean is like a tonic to me. I do love it. you are a blessing to my heart...thanks for your well wishes and encouragement.
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/5/2012 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Doris, its just a pleasure to be back on-line with you. You are motivating. Lee
Date: 7/29/2012 8:26:00 PM
Hi, Lee I love the flow, every line is a genuine rhyming couplet... The morning image is worth the wake.. I'm always looking forward to the tiny crimson horizon ... may I escape with this lovely poem.. you painted a world beyond a beautiful dream, even more lovely than the cobalt waters that surround me... Good luck in the contest.. nice to see you back..xox~pd
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Lee Ramage
Date: 8/5/2012 10:42:00 AM
Thank you so much. Glad to be back on-line. Lee

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