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Blue Cheese and Old Pickles

Have you heard the story, in all of it's fun and glory. It is about a young girl named Lori, she went with a boy named John Dory. She went running to the lavatory, was this going to become inflammatory? Eating blue cheese and old pickles each day, sitting by the bay. Her boyfriend John Dory just wanted to play, she kept saying no way. Now on her birthday, she is getting a baby not a blue jay.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/22/2025 8:58:00 AM

Good luck! Don’t ghtful.It was really quirky Many women got pregnant in strange ways and very original the love story is wonderful within. Gracias, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2025 7:16:00 PM

Thank You for stopping over and for your Good luck. Glad you enjoyed my whimsical story. I enjoyed bringing this Rhyme to life. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/22/2025 6:54:00 AM

Hello Paula, this is an excellent piece, I loved it. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2025 7:14:00 PM

Thank You for stopping over and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my whimsical Rhyme story to be, an excellent piece, I loved it. It was a ton of fun writing this one. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2025 2:37:00 AM

A very creative take on the prompt dear paula, different to what iv read mostly. And i must also highlight the rhymes, and the rhythm of your poem: great storytelling throughout! Very lighthearted and fun! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes for the contest; sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2025 7:12:00 PM

Thank You for stopping over and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my whimsical Rhyme story to be, great storytelling throughout. I had so much fun writing this one. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/21/2025 5:51:00 PM

whoa, this went the rioutous way, paula...i like your sense of imagination!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2025 7:07:00 PM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you like my sense of imagination. It was a fun/whimsical story to write. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

John Read

Date: 3/21/2025 12:21:00 PM

Dear Lori had her blue cheese and pickles each day, while old John Dory got his end away,have a lovely evening Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/22/2025 7:04:00 PM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my whimsical story. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2025 7:04:00 AM

A difficult ending.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2025 8:51:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my whimsical Rhyme write/story. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/21/2025 5:51:00 AM

Dear Paula, As I read this I thought what a delightful blend of humor and wordplay! I liked the unexpected twist from blue cheese and pickles to a surprise pregnancy is both clever and amusing. Your rhyme scheme, especially with "Lori" and "John Dory," is quite creative. Such a whimsical tale that made me smile! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2025 8:49:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my whimsical story to be, both clever and amusing. Also glad this one gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles. I had so much fun writing this one. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/21/2025 3:02:00 AM

Now ain't that's sweet? Quite a fun poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2025 8:43:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my whimsical story to be, Quite a fun poem. This one was a ton of fun to write. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/20/2025 8:47:00 PM

Perhaps the cheese and pickles made her a bit intoxicated. Best avoid in the future. An enjoyable read. Thank you Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2025 8:41:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my whimsical story to be, An enjoyable read. It was so much fun to bring to life. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/20/2025 6:59:00 PM

LOL Paula. INteresting poem. She got more than she bargained for.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2025 8:39:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over. Glad you found my whimsical story to be an, Interesting poem. I had so much fun writing this one. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2025 1:48:00 PM

- A funny story, Paula :) - John needs to find another girl to play with :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/21/2025 8:36:00 AM

Thank You for stopping over and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my whimsical story. Yes, John needs a new girlfriend. This one was a ton of fun to write. Hugs... Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/20/2025 1:36:00 PM

Blue Cheese and Old Pickles~Date Written: 3/20/2025~Written By Human....