Caryl Muzzey Poet Couplet

Blue Brine Horizon

Swelling tide billows in with ultimate force,  
insulting bronze sandy shoreline on its course.  

Tossing creatures about in brine water home,  
mixing, churning into a white frothy foam.  

Against blue horizon velvet waters peer to merge,  
illusion vanishes with every sea wavelet surge. 

Eyes search far beyond azure ocean so vast,
replicates placidity recently glassed….  

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Dinda Minardi July 10, 2011 at 7:42 AM Wow... u really mastered the words! I like how you described the waves :)

Nette Onclaud July 3, 2011 at 9:21 AM i wanna glide with you, caryl... refreshin offering! :) hugggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2011 at 11:29 PM some nice images, Caryl. I especially liked that third stanza where the blue horizon is mentioned.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 28, 2011 at 8:41 PM just luv the ocean Caryl and u made it so pretty with the many phases of it's fabulous waves and colors.. good luck in the contest.. taking a dip with your words so perfect..

Doris Culverhouse June 28, 2011 at 6:51 PM Enjoyed your blue horizon!!

Cory Long June 28, 2011 at 6:22 PM this is wonderfully written good luck in the contest. cory

Dr.Ram Mehta June 28, 2011 at 5:38 PM Wonderful entry to the contest, Caryl