Blue Blueberries

Blue--a "vision" of beauty is the blueberry loaded with blue
Blue--"gentle" the dew as it kisses each tender morsal of skin
Blue--soft and "quiet" the foosteps that approach the bush loaded with blue
Blue--cobalt blue blueberries "excite" the taste buds as they touch the tongue
Blue--blueberry crunch'n warm from the oven cinnamon 'aroma" fills the air

Vision__sight
gentle__touch
quiet__hear
excite__taste
aroma__smell

A "vision" of the blueberry bush loaded with its blue 
Awesome gift of "touch" granted to caress each berry 
During morn's "quiet", gently embraced by the dew 
One picked to "excite" the taste buds, two picked while I tarry
Many picked for dessert, "aroma" floats, awaits cream from dairy 

Flavors Marry

Written: Saturday October 24, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 6:56 AM
I like how you wrote the one, congrats.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Excellent rhyme poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
A  Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Sara, a warm feeling to your wonderful and tasty win, Congratulations -- SKAT
Reams Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Congrats on your win Sara! I could taste the blueberries in this write. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
Hay Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Such a gentle and lovely poem to enter in this very challenging contest, good luck Sara! :) , warm regards, Laura.
Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:41 PM
Congrats Sara! Well done :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 6:05 PM
very nice, Sara. I sure had a hard time understanding how to do this challenge so maybe I will not try it. Sure hope you did it right, so you can get a win on this lovely poem.
Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 6:07 AM
Andrea, I don't know if I did it right but I tried..LOL.. Sara
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Sara, clever and wow! still am thinking what should I do for this contest.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
Sirak Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 6:31 AM
I love blueberries, they are a feast for the body, and I love your poetry, it is a feast for the mind.
Goff Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:16 PM
Sara, wonderful, creative free-form! have picked blueberries meself! You are spot-on in this delightful poem! jimmy
Muideen Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 1:27 AM
That is always you SARA, your excellent write is intriguing. Brilliant one............A.M.
May Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Blueberry muffins are my favorite...Nicely penned Sara...
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