Blue Blueberries

Blue--a "vision" of beauty is the blueberry loaded with blue
Blue--"gentle" the dew as it kisses each tender morsal of skin
Blue--soft and "quiet" the foosteps that approach the bush loaded with blue
Blue--cobalt blue blueberries "excite" the taste buds as they touch the tongue
Blue--blueberry crunch'n warm from the oven cinnamon 'aroma" fills the air

Vision__sight
gentle__touch
quiet__hear
excite__taste
aroma__smell

A "vision" of the blueberry bush loaded with its blue 
Awesome gift of "touch" granted to caress each berry 
During morn's "quiet", gently embraced by the dew 
One picked to "excite" the taste buds, two picked while I tarry
Many picked for dessert, "aroma" floats, awaits cream from dairy 

Flavors Marry

Written: Saturday October 24, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/12/2015 6:56:00 AM
I like how you wrote the one, congrats.
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:49:00 PM
Excellent rhyme poem. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:09:00 AM
Sara, a warm feeling to your wonderful and tasty win, Congratulations -- SKAT
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sara! I could taste the blueberries in this write. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
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Date: 11/5/2015 10:14:00 AM
Such a gentle and lovely poem to enter in this very challenging contest, good luck Sara! :) , warm regards, Laura.
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/12/2015 2:41:00 PM
Congrats Sara! Well done :)
Date: 11/3/2015 6:05:00 PM
very nice, Sara. I sure had a hard time understanding how to do this challenge so maybe I will not try it. Sure hope you did it right, so you can get a win on this lovely poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2015 6:07:00 AM
Andrea, I don't know if I did it right but I tried..LOL.. Sara
Date: 10/27/2015 7:57:00 AM
Sara, clever and wow! still am thinking what should I do for this contest.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 10/27/2015 6:31:00 AM
I love blueberries, they are a feast for the body, and I love your poetry, it is a feast for the mind.
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:16:00 PM
Sara, wonderful, creative free-form! have picked blueberries meself! You are spot-on in this delightful poem! jimmy
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Date: 10/25/2015 1:27:00 AM
That is always you SARA, your excellent write is intriguing. Brilliant one............A.M.
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Date: 10/24/2015 2:17:00 PM
Blueberry muffins are my favorite...Nicely penned Sara...
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